The idea is quite clear, there needs to be a little bit more "play" on how the letters and words are "illustrated".http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2540/3866252717_06b43a2760.jpghttp://2.bp.blogspot.com/-H_8BfsPTKxQ/TVzkn0KXDTI/AAAAAAAABtw/rpsDPh2N9XU/s1600/mouth_typography_metro72.jpghttp://drawingsonthefridge.files.wordpress.com/2010/04/81.jpgIllustrate the words manually and give it a little more personality. You have demonstrated some very good development in drawing using lines, hatching and mark making. Use it.
The idea is quite clear, there needs to be a little bit more "play" on how the letters and words are "illustrated".
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Illustrate the words manually and give it a little more personality. You have demonstrated some very good development in drawing using lines, hatching and mark making. Use it.